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WRITING FOR NEWSPAPE1S. Tell Story in First Paragraph and Withhold Personal Opinion. Probably not one reader in a hun dred has paused to notice that a news paper article is written on a plan just the reverse of that of a sermon or ora tion. Comparatively few ministers have analyzed the subject sufficiently to notice this fact, and their ignor ance of it will often account for the reluctance of newspapers to accept matter contributed by them. It is worth the while cf every man and woman to know the general plan oin which newspaper articles are written, 1or almost everybody desires at times to announce something through the press. The mere knowledge of the theory will note make a successful writer in this or any other depart ment, but it is the first step. The skialAZul preacher or orator us ually rese,ves his n:ost important points unt.: teward the ena* of his dis course. closing with a t.imax. The skillful newspaper reporter puts his elimax Into his first sentence and ends with the most non-essential detail. While the novelist secures his drama tic effect by keeping the secret of his story as long as possitAle, the reporter attains success by revealing his secret as quickly as words will let him. Both are working on princples as clearly defined as that on which a sonnet is constructed, but the modern news paper article is of so much more re eent date that few critics have analyz ed it and even many of the best news paper writers work daily upon the foregoing principle without knowing it No man can work many days under a metropolitan city editor without learning It. If he does not pick up the knack promptly he is given a chance to learn some other business. The reasons for -this method of con struction are plain. The object of a newspaper "story" Is to tell the news for its own sake. The majority of Teaders do not have time to read the whole of an article. What they want is a compact statement of the essen *al facts of an Incident or a crime or a public meeting. The best newspaper is the one that gives them the pith of the whole matter in the first para -raph, Tollowing this with the more important details and closing with me least important. The reader then gIanees down the column- far enough to get the vital facts and does not waste time on the rest. He can get a $air knowledge of the whole world's *ews for the day by merely reading the headlines and opening paragraphs of the paper, while perhaps bu.t one article Is interesting enough to read every line. There is also airother important eause which has contributed to this method of presenting the news with Sthe cream always on top. As startling events do not occur in this woiuld with any regularity, though the paper must always be issued at the same hour, it alatujrily follows that there is an ever-varying pressure on the colmuns. The reporters begin work on a morn ing paper at 1 o'clock on the preceding day. At the time when they do their "afternoon assignment" there may be s.pace In abundance, and their articles enay be written In considerable de tall. IJate in 'the evening there may be a great fire or some important vic tory on the battlefield that will sud denly demand a dozen or a score of *olumns. It becomes necessary to "cut" everything of ordinary import once. By that time the earlier "stories" are in type and can not be rewritten. The condensing is done by dropping off the latter part of the article, which can be done without Inj aeing Its es sential parts if it is constructed on 'the proper plan. Every large news paper nightly "kills" many coTlumns of matter in this way, either before It is in type or afterward. If the vital news were scattered through the ar 'ticle there would be no alterna.tive but to leave it all out. Here is where the would-be corres pondent so often. meets his Waterloo. The young and ambitious editor of a country weekly gets a commission to represent his town as telegraphic cor respondent of a large city daily. Per haps there is a bad fire in the village and several lives are lost. He tele graphs a graphic account of it in de tail, telling it in such a way that one must read 1,000 words to discover how many persons were killed or injured and what is the total value of the property destroyed. The "story" Teaches the telegraph glitor at a time when he Is working under high pres sure to cut down ala news "to the marrow" in order to make room for some event of world-wide import. The country correspondent's matter is use less unless printed entire or rewritten. There is neither the space for the one or the time for the other. The re sult is that the article goes into the waste basket and the aspiring cor respondent receives notice that his services are no longer desired. Nearly every reporter learns this lesson by hard experience and much wasted labor. Every editor has bad his patience tried to the boiling point y contributions that might be used if they did not violate the first con mandruent of the newspaper dialogue. -tel the i.ews in the first sentence. I should not like to compute how many coluins I wrote for the waste baskat before I discovered this simple rule of jour.a'ismn, or how many I have blue penciled or rewritten for other begin ners since I have attained to the dig nity of "desk work." If the public had a better realization of the hard 'drill on such points that must precede all success in newspaper work there would be a less general impression that any man who has failed in other lines can be an editor impromptu. Briefly stated, the chief rules for an ordinary news article are these: Tell the whole story in your first sen tence, or at least in your frst para graph, and the briefer the paragraph the better. Be sure to give in your opening lines the time, place and chief actors concerned, along with the scope and nature of the event chronicled. Avoid exclamations, fine writing, flaming adjectives or editorial com ment. If it is a piece of news in i which timeliness is an important ele ment, get it to your paper as quickly as your lucky stars will let you. Tell your story in the fewest words possi ble without omitting Cssential details. If you can not shake off the hallucina tion that an introduction is needed, put it at the end, where the editor can cut it off. There are a hundred other details, such as writng on but one side of the paper, leaving margins on the sheets, never rolling the copy, writing plainly, putting the name and address at the top of the manuscript, and the like, which are geneially knowin. But without the knowledge that a news article is not written like an oration, all these are comparatively useless. The tendency to preach, vvhich news paper men call "editorializing," alsol causes many an otherwise news item from outside contributors to go upon the floor. It would be as great an ad vantage to the press as to the clergy and the laymen if the chief rules for writing a newspaper article were more accurately and widely under stood.-Christian Advocate. REFUSED VICE PEESIDENCY. Mark Hanna Wanted Mr. DolIlver, Then a Representative, to Take Second Place on Ticket. Minneapolis, Minn., Oct. 27.-George F. Authier, political editor of The Tri bune, asserts that the late Senatcr Jonathan P. Dolniver, prior to his death, told him confidentially, with permission a publish it later the fol lowing story of how the senator, then a representative in congress, refused the nomination for the vice presidency In 1900, which, if it had been accept ed, would ha.ve made him president instead of Roosevelt and would have changed the political history of the country. He also asserts that Sena tor Dolliver's wife, who was a niece of D. K. Pearson, the Chicago multi millionaire, was possibly responsible for his refusal to accept this nomina tion.I The story as told by the senator, ac cording to this editor's statement, gives a new coloring to the reports as to how the nomination of Roosevelt was effected. The late: Senator Dolli ver is quoted as follows: "Some months before the conven-. tion that nominated McKinley the sec ond time Mark Hanna, who was man aging Mr. McKinley's campaign, met me In Chicago and told me some of the difficulties he was experiencing in securing a running-mate for McKin 1ey. 'I wishi,' hie said to me, 'that -you would accept thils nomination.' He told me they wanted a man who could go on the stump and hold some such positon in the Republican party as - Bryan occupied in the Democratic or- "" ganization. fil "I told Mr. Hanna that I expected de and hoped to be elected United States R< senator from Iowa, that I regarded the th vice presidency as a shelving place, Pl and that I was not a cantlidate for a n political sarcophagus. Then he asked me if I would permit the use of my he name, promisng that at the proper v time it WOuld be withdrawn. He told H me there were several undesirable R candidates in the field, among them t Timothy Woodruff, of New York, and others. 'Woodruff,' he explained, 'is iz impossible because he has a hundred Ith and fifty fancy vests.' Still inother hi one was ruiled out on the ground that ti. 'he Is back on his alimony.' He ex plained that the use of my name would Ih4 keep down this list of undersirable hi candidates, and I agreed with him that at the mention of my name in connection to with so distinguished an office could do me no harm and might be of value de to me. d "When I went down to Philadelphia H shortly before the convention I dis- th covered that my candidacy had as- to sumed serious proportions. My col- to leagues in the house had taken hold W of the matter and my nomination was Y assured unless Mr. Hanna kept his ai promise. I went to him and told him p that it was time for him to redeem his Ni pledge. "His reply was: 'Dolliver, we are up to against it The is no man in the d THE New Dres, Shoe FOR F Beginning Wedne( We have decided to conti nesday, November 23, and ar< Dry Goods, Silks, Shoes and Dress Goods and Silks. These are great values, styles righ Price very low. You must see them I kne%w their value. They must go. Ju as a starter we place on sale 36 in. Black Taffeta Silk, worth $1.2, at special the yard..............8c 36 in. green, blue and all colors, wort $1.25, at special the yard........7 54 in. Broadcloth, black and all color worth $1-50, special the yard...8 45 in. Mohair, black, great value, wort $1.25, special the yard. ........9 44 in. Mohair, black and colosts. vaht 75c., special the yard...........4 36. in. Suiting, all styles, value 35C special the yard...............2: 32 in. black Satine, value 25c., speci theyard...........------.... Underwear, Shirts and Sweater Never before have you had the chan' to buy these goods in season for the prices. Now is the time and The Havii ICo. is the place. Come early and g the pick. Our loss is your gain. Come all! For 15 days tli THE]l Next door to Van Sm rd ho will make a suitable candi- that was nece e'I said to him: 'Why not name to go to see M evelt?' He told me he understood ly consented ewas a movement on among the Hanna's roon atRepublicans of New York to had a calcare late Roosevelt in order to shelve He was sittin m,nd get him out of New York, but and leg exte ad hie understood that Mr. Roose- chair. He an wc .ld not accept the nomination, each other, a eldi not express any objection to nary~ conversa svelt as the vice presidential 'Mr. Rooseveli miee. nation all yo "fer some conversation he author- say so,' and 19 e to call on Mr. Roosevelt, put that he would iuation up to him, and to assure tion if it 'weri e could have the vice presiden- "We left M > mination if he wanted it. order to fort alled on Mr. Roosevelt at his Mr. Roosevell l.I found him in his room, with stopped in at s>cat a.nd vest off, his collar off, fice and gave dwith his face flushed. He seemed Mr. Roosevelt egreatly excited- the nominatio "Wen I told him the situation he "Adta. rred on the ground that he un- lie"And tht. ~rtod that neither McKinley nor priver,ti ot ,n wanted him. I assured himprsdnoft he was mistaken. Then he said Mr. Dollive: ,biting his words as he uttered the story, but e,'It seems singular that the men a note of regi ocan make me governor of New had not acce kwant me to be vice preside'nt, nomination. 1thse who can make me vice eidnt want me to be governor of ork., Mr. Depew Afer an extensive conversationl I career, and 1 him if he wanted to be vice presi- His place wil an th tin fr hm to do, and all real ability. HAVIRD CUT PRIC OF 5 Goods, D s and Clot] IFTEEN lday, November 23 nue our Grand Cut Price Sale for going to offer our large and co: Clothing at very low prices. Cot One case Wright's Health Underwear, all wool, worth $1.25, now each..89c t One case fleece lined Underwear, worth : 65c., now each..................44C t One lot Ladies' wool Underskirts, worth $1.25, now each..............89c One lot Children's Underwear at 34 price. One lot Ladies' Sweater Coats, worth h $2.oo, now each............$.39 h One lot Men's Sweater Coats, worth I $1.25, now each..... ..........89c ~One lot Ladies' mercerized Underskirts IC worth $1.50, nlow each.........89c h One case Men's Dress Shirts, worth 75c., ec now each.. ..s........--..-.-...- 39c e One case Men's Dress Shirts, worth $1.25, e now each......... .... .......89c G~Cothing, Pants and Overcoats. 1l One lot Men's Dress Suits, extra value, )C suit............-----------$5.98 One lot Men's Dress Suits, $15.oo value, now suit........-.-.--------$8.98 One lot Men's Dress Pants, worth $5-oo, e now pair.........--...--- ..-$398 e One lot~ Men's Dress Pants, worth $2.50, c1 now pair ..................$1-79 t One lot Men's Pants, worth $>.5o, now pair........................ 98c is sale willbhe on for yourbh ith's Drug Store. Neil sa.ry for him to do, was Psil hnte rk Hanna, and he final-taknaouthne o do so. We went toYokomenrti together. Mr. Hannaalnadbudtem ous growth on his knee. with a bandaged foot ASS3ETO E nded on an addjoining ETYFRISA Mr. Roosevelt greeted I,oanutrie nd after some prelimi- a h olwn lc tion Mr. Hanna said: frteproeo a ;, if you want this nomi-pesnlrortfr t will have to do is to NebryJauy [r. Roosevelt finally saidsie not refuse the nomina- Kiad,Wneay given him.Wliir,Tusa . Hanna's room and in Jnay1 n 3 stall the possibility of JlySre,Mna 's changing his mind I Pmra usa,J the Associated Press of- Wat,Wdnsy. out the information that Gypvle hrd had consented to accept MabionFrdy3 concluded Senator Dol- Ltl onan near I came to being25 lauhedwhn h tod t.Po sy, Frieny Jhe takn abt hery nwt aftrk whchae anergti e ha dill enjoe onit the d reuildhem I be ~ ~ ~ a taebaano The flowqirg pace ews nd Corier. e wbal er ys, nuar Co.'s E SALE! ry Goods, iing. DAYS -8 O'clock A. M. fifteen days, beginning Wed nplete line of Dress Goods, ne now, come every day. kll-wool Cravenette Overcoats, worth $io.oo, now each.............$6.98 kll-wool Cravenette Overcoats, worth $15.oo, now each ............ $9.98 Shoes! Shoes! Shoes! Every pair solid and wear well. )ne lot Men's Dress Shoes, worth $5.oo, now pair . ................$3.49 )ne lot Men's Dress Shoes, worth $3.50, now pair.. ................$2.49 )ne lot Ladies' Dress Shoes7 worth $4.oo, now pair................. $2.98 D)ne lot Ladies' Dress Shoes, worth $2.5&, now pair ..................$1.89 Dne lot Ladies' Dress Shoes, worth $r-5o, now pair. ...... ..............98c All heavy winter Shoes at greatly re duced prices. Mfen's Hats at half price. All Hats and Caps to go regardless of cost and value. Men's soc. Neckwear now each.---39c Sheets and Pillow Cases half price. 5-4 Pepperal Sheeting, worth Soc., no0w yard............. ... .... ....29c 5-4 Pepperal Sheeting, worth 35c., now yard........................ 21c enefit. Our loss, your gain CO., berr.y, South Carolina. get through gages, also an income tax on groser ubways in New incomes in excess of $2,500. nan will come There shall be a capitation tax of frfty cents on all dogs, the proceeds to be expended for school purposes. |SONAL PROP- Dogs not returned for taxation shall YEAR 1911. not be considered as property in any agent, will be of the courts of this State. 3 named below All male persons between the ages :ing returns of of 21 and 60 years are liable to pay scal year 1911: poll tax, except Confederate soldiers, L to 10, inclu- or those persons incapable of earn ing a support from being maimed or Jan. 11 from any other cause. and Friday, Nothing but personal property is to be assessed this year, but all persons , Jan. 16. who have bought or sold any real 2es m. 17. tate since last return are required to [an. 18. note such transfers on their returns y, Jan. 19. for 1911. an. 20. All property must be assessed "at and Tuesday, its true value," which Is construed to mean "the sum of money for which adnsday, Jan. such property, under ordinary cir cumstances, would sell for cash." ,n. 26. Please do not ask that your prop n. 27. erty be .taken from the auditor's dui Jan. 30. plicate the same as last return, for ,Jan. 31. the law requires that all property 7, Feb. 1. must be histed on regular tax return i February 20, blanks an dsigned and sworn to by alty of 50 per person listing same. ist all persons, Name of township and school dis aling to make trict must be given on every return. Eug. 8. Werts, x to be charg-- Auditor Newberry County. ~e a mrt. Nwwhervy, S. C